Matt Bellamy

I don't want the phone to ring again, I don't want to hear you knocking on my door, No more notes taped to my desk, I just can't take them ...

I really liked this. For one thing, I have just read two poems which had no capital letters, rhyming or punctuation. And I'm not complaining about that at all, but ...

simple lists made on the back of complex black and white medical mixtures of letters just outline the date in bold, livid marker. the weak, spindly second hand of the ...

I'm always unsure whether or not to say anything when no commas or capital letters are used because different poets seem to do it differently. So I've taken your poem ...

Sounds like my old IT lessons, ah, so familiar. I think you captured the atmosphere well in just a few lines. Not fantastic, but I do quite like it. And ...

Twelve isn't as young as you think it is. Surely the author knows how young twelve is, since she is twelve herself? Anyway, I think it's cute :P The typos ...

I liked the way the stanzas and lines were structured-I think that worked well. However, I'm pretty sure it's "around", not "round", which annoys me no end ;)

It has a very innocent feel to it, as if Charlie were saying it himself. I agree that the rhythm needs some work, just adding some words, altering some lines ...

I liked the imagery in this poem, you described it well and I really felt like I was there. Forgive me for not being very helpful but I haven't critiqued ...

Loved it, it caught my attention immediately. Everyone else has gone through the grammar issues etc, all I'll say is that I didn't want it to end, so my suggestion ...

It is rather vague, in some places I'm not really sure what you're talking about. Also I didn't like "wanna", might sound better if you change it to "want to"? ...

I found it hard to follow, but I really liked it simply based on your imagery, and I think I have a vague idea of what it's about. I think ...

I see what you're trying to say, but it seems you're having trouble expressing it while making your poem flow. At the moment that majority of it is just a ...

I agree with Whence, the capitals threw me off, and your writing should be able to speak for itself without them - show me you're shouting through description, not capitals. ...

"Stop it." --New line here? Reina let out a small shriek as a pair of cold hands rest on her shoulder. Did both his hands rest on her one shoulder, ...